Kia ora and welcome to my blog and this lockdown has been really challenging but also really fun. in lockdown learning we have been doing quick wright and here is one of the quick writes I am really proud of it. Have you ever done this before?
Friday, September 10, 2021
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Hey Emily!, this is a really cool story and you did really well, I was thinking you could improve on your full stops and capital letter in the right spot, overall this is really good and you should feel proud of it. Good job!
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DeleteHi Emily, this really did seem like a haunted hotel. I loved the personification " the dancing grass tickled my legs". I would of loved to hear more of the story about the killer. Perhaps you could of told what the killer did to the children. Love to see more of your blogs check out mine.
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DeleteHi emily It Davneet I really liked the base of this story a killer. See you in class.
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