hey this term we have been writing persuasive peaces. here is an example of my persuasive peaces of writing.
students should choose their teacher
Teachers, are you tired of children not knowing what to do. Well if you let students choose their teacher, there will be no more children coming to you saying “i don't know what to do!”.I believe students should choose their teachers, because if your student doesn't know what to do, they can just ask someone they're comfortable working with. We must choose our teachers because if we don’t we will be completely clueless but if we do we can just ask our friends for help.We should be allowed to choose our teachers because if we don't children will be like “oh no what do i do” and constantly come to you teachers and you have to repeat yourself all over again. In conclusion we should choose our teacher because they can ask someone their comfortable working with, instead of asking a teacher OK let me tell you that if we choose our teacher no more Winnie children coming to you teachers.
have you ever done persuasive writing tell me in the comets bellow.
see you next term.
........ Sorry about that, I am just so speechless right now. I can't believe you can write such descriptive and persuasive argument. If I were a teacher I would be so hypnotised by your argument that I would say yes.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time, before you persuasive argument explain more in your introduction.
Other than that, great job!