Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 16, 2020
the tale of the mystical creatures
this term i have been learning how to wright a narrative here is a peace that i have been working on. have you ever done narrative before if you have comment yes or no. try it its fun.
Thousands of mystical creatures emerged from caves and dragons lit the fire, Unicorns used their magic to make an invisible barrier so no human could see, baby griffins learning how to fly. But one so young but so great a little girl named Paige, she has a special power she can see through the barrier and grant wishes amazing right. Paige is very special to the creatures so they made her their queen and said are you honoured “i need to make an announcement” said queen Paige as there was silence, “i am so sorry to say but i will not be back in one full week. I will be off to some place called school” the creatures gasped and cried out “please don’t go we won't know what to do so please stay with us” 'i am terrible sorry goodbye.” As the creatures' magical tears ran down their faces they missed her terribly so without thinking they took down the barrier and started following their queen from the air and from the earth but still very hidden. They went to the pools, tennis even school they even went to her house then memorised. The next day went by and the creatures did the same thing over and over again until the week was over she came back and said “i am back my Beautiful Creatures. Hello?” “Happy Birthday!” Cried out the creatures . “how did you know it was my birthday today?” Paige said confused but also happy. Just my mind reading powers that you granted and know here is your wish granted as one of the beautiful unicorns started making a forever Siberian husky pup who is always behaved! How great is that.